Such powerful emotion and expression of pain.

"Happiness left long ago
Darkness and heartache abound
Screaming, moaning, cry's of grief
Are now the only sounds"

I felt the pain of this stanza right through to my core.. a beautiful write dear...

My dear Cindy,

Please look around you sweetheart...there are so many people who care so deeply for you. None of us can replace your husband but we try our best to give you our love...and hope you feel our warmth.

Love, always

5/5 Ingrid

Wow thats deep good wright keep it up

Thats a lovely piece cindy, its really meaningful, i really like ur last stanza to and the words that create a lasting impression, great work darls xox sam

A very good write cindy. very sad and very well expressed. your writing has grown so much. good job. ben thompson

Dear Cindy

the despair you portray is like a dagger in the heart. this write has so much raw emotion - it's so easy to see how you feel.

if there is anything i can do to ease your pain, let me know. will be there for you always

love, peace and luck
shobhana

Sorry for being so late dear.

Haunting memories, control thoughts
Dark shadows all around
Blinded by agonizing pain
Curled uncaring on the ground

this one really cuts through heart, memories is all that we have and tears is all they give...loved the first stanza

Trying to go on without you
To me an impossible task
Living without your love
I don't think that I can last

well you will last...and last forever......somehow thats what the aim of my life is now and there are so many who loves you.....i m sure u know how dear you are to this site.
so stay!!

all the best and take care

Wow Cindy....you have written another very powerful poem of loss and longing....I believe many can relate whether through loss of a loved one because of death. or just separation....I know I can...

"Nothingness wraps around me
Blanketing my soul
Needing you to hold me
My life has become so cold"

^ love this verse....so sad and hauntingly beautiful...

Beautifully written, great rhyme and flow....Love, Debbie

I love your poem

Awesome poem it reminds me of when my ex bf and i broke up for the first time within 4yrs

That is a really good poem... keep up the good work...

This poem is amazing but sad =[

MY FAVOURITE POEM