Alone now

I really like the concept of this poem its really good!

The ending almost didn't work but you pulled it off. ^-^ I liked it! I'll give you a 5/5. <3

I love how each stanza flowed and how the emotions were one I could relate with.

"I am all alone now
Someone take away
This emptyness i feel inside "
^I think the last line should just be "This emptiness" because the last sentence in each stanza is two words and starts with "my" and "this"

Other then that, it was a nice read.
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It's short, yet it gets the emotions across. I recommend making it a little bit longer maybe? :]] But you still did a marvelous job on it.

"I am all alone now
Someone take away"

^ Love the repetition on these lines -- They really got your point across. Amazing job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5

-- Steph. <33

It's a nice and short poem. However, the repetition kind of killed the flow. Maybe if u made it longer, it would look better. 4/5 <---for now.

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