Simply great, I love the repetition. Though it's just few words, I can feel the emotion and I can relate to it!!! It's worth 5/5!!! |
by Ciao Bella
I like the style of this poem its really good...good job |
by Shinobi
This poem is nice but short. The flow keeps on repeating all the way to the end. The rhymes are repeating too. Although that, the shortness of this poem emphasizes the stress feeling. 4/5 |
Interesting to say the least. Not bad. 4/5 |
It's a nice and short poem. However, the repetition kind of killed the flow. Maybe if u made it longer, it would look better. 4/5 <---for now. |
by Stephanie
It's short, yet it gets the emotions across. I recommend making it a little bit longer maybe? :]] But you still did a marvelous job on it. |
by Blissful
I love how each stanza flowed and how the emotions were one I could relate with. |
by RobinAnn13
The ending almost didn't work but you pulled it off. ^-^ I liked it! I'll give you a 5/5. <3 |
I really like the concept of this poem its really good! |