Comments : Alone now

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Simply great, I love the repetition. Though it's just few words, I can feel the emotion and I can relate to it!!! It's worth 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    I like the style of this poem its really good...good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is nice but short. The flow keeps on repeating all the way to the end. The rhymes are repeating too. Although that, the shortness of this poem emphasizes the stress feeling. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Interesting to say the least. Not bad. 4/5

  • It's a nice and short poem. However, the repetition kind of killed the flow. Maybe if u made it longer, it would look better. 4/5 <---for now.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    It's short, yet it gets the emotions across. I recommend making it a little bit longer maybe? :]] But you still did a marvelous job on it.

    "I am all alone now
    Someone take away"

    ^ Love the repetition on these lines -- They really got your point across. Amazing job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5

    -- Steph. <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    I love how each stanza flowed and how the emotions were one I could relate with.

    "I am all alone now
    Someone take away
    This emptyness i feel inside "
    ^I think the last line should just be "This emptiness" because the last sentence in each stanza is two words and starts with "my" and "this"

    Other then that, it was a nice read.
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    The ending almost didn't work but you pulled it off. ^-^ I liked it! I'll give you a 5/5. <3

  • 17 years ago

    by IllNeverBGoodEnouf

    I really like the concept of this poem its really good!