Brillaint job! very sad and emotional it made me cry. keep up the great writing xxx

Dude sweet as poem!! like it lotz......soz i havent emailed you in a while..my new email is squeaky_mouse93@hotmail.com

talk to me darlz!

rhiannon

I just love ur writing! <3 5/5 =]

This was a really sad poem...a girl planning her suicide for years and no one even seen through those fake smiles...again i can relate...5/5 again

<3Amber

I got a question though...why did she pick up a knife when she overdoes on pills??Just wonderin'...it's still a great poem though :)

<3Amber