Wow, wow, wow!
I'm honestly impressed, this is so deep and excellently written.
Amazing poem, with such vivid and powerful imagery. I love every stanza, whole piece is fantastic. Great job with this one.
Whole story behind the poem is excellent and interesting, and this piece is refreshingly original with good message.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading your amazing work!
5/5 from me

Only word that comes in my mind is WOW!!!

Whole piece is simply brilliant, so effective, and you showed once again that you are amazing writer.

I love everything about this poem, it goes directly to my favorite poems. Absolutely impressing, message is so good and topic is really great.
You wrote this poem with such power and your own, fascinating, style.
Outstanding! Truly brilliant!
Every stanza is so breath-taking but second one is totally mind-blowing!

I enjoyed in every line, well done! You deserves so much more than 5-5 for this one.