Sweetie, we've all been there. You're poem had a lot of impact.. reminds me of how much love, midst all it's splendor, can kill.
-xx-

Yes we all been there.. we get crushed, destoyed inside.. why did he lie to me.. bla bla bla.. but some realtionships work or dnt.. love is pain.. and so is a crush too.. I like it really nice job..