"She sit there, " << sits.

Wow, this is an amazing poem, darling.
I really liked it.
Some of the rhymes could have been better.
And, in the first line you can take out a comma.

But, other than those few minor things you did wonders with this poem
It's so sad, yet so amazing.
You did a great, great, great job with it.
5/5

Wow! 5/5 x