Nice writing, my man. I like your perspectives on money and on love, but I tell you, I think money (for me) is certainly a road to happiness. Love is nice too :) Haha, money would make traveling so much easier...and I LOVE traveling. Love.

Take care and good luck with ****. Heh. I hope you she gives you unconditional love, as you've expressed for her.

I fukced that last sentence up. Forgive me. But really, reading your "therapy session" was definitely worth the while. I like peeking into your mind.

I have to say, that was one of the most touching things I have read in A LONG time. It was amazing. It expressed REAL situations && challenges we face everyday. Some lines or words that truly stuck out to me were "Not the money, the expensive jewelery, the fancy sports car your father bought you when you graduated, but the absolute vulnerability you feel when you stare into their eyes, thats what truly matters."

I am happy that you finally got past your fear && I hope you know that by taking the time to release your emotions/feelings in this you may have not only changed my outlooks on money and love but many other people on this site as well.

This was totally worth reading for the past however many minutes it took me to read.

Amber...

Holy crap, long long read, but it was very very touching. it made me happy and sad in a mixed weird way of emotion. its good

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But I often wonder, even if I pick my head up and open my eyes, and just somehow see past the fog if only for a moment, will it really make a difference?

that qoute made my day because it makes us all think, almost generalizes society. I love it because i can see how much effort and thought you put into it. Your right money shouldnt be the main focus of our lifes. Even though it is now it seems. You seemed to of captured a society's secret emotions, weather it be a 14 year old girl confused about her boyfriend, or a 55 year old man who's wife just left him. you caught it all in one fell sweep. I rate this 5/5

I like this one too =)
~ 5 / 5 ~
Nicole xx

This is filled with so much emotion, and even though its not a poem its really nicely expressed.
i liked how you did the whole money and love thing.
i also liked when you were talking about the road in your life and stepping on your brakes.
it was all very nicely put together.
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5/5

Love i agree is alot more important then money I fell in love even at my young age but I have been torn and have not seen the good side of it, its been a year and I still cannot rid of the pain that makes me an insomiac. It was a truly great opinion of yours and Im glad to have read your experience very nice 5/5 and you dont have to read 6 of poems just one " In love and obcessed " If you have a session two plz contact me.

I have been across the same path as yours before.. I stopped looking for someone to call mine. Someone who will just turn out to be another fling. I waited almost a full year. Turning down the boys I knew weren't good enough. Then I came across one person.. he was amazing. You might think I'm young.. but I really love him. I'm moving in a month and we are willing to stay together even though we'll be 700 miles apart... We'll still be together. Out of all of your thoughts I really liked this one:

I've driven down the road of lust to many times, and the signs on the road as I pass by with my eyes closed, just become even more of a blur. But I often wonder, even if I pick my head up and open my eyes, and just somehow see past the fog if only for a moment, will it really make a difference?

I'm glad you found the person you are wanting to be with. She's very lucky.

5/5

I'm adding you to my favorites.

Really i have nothing to say but wow. that was outstanding you have so much talent and it was in such a good form i think i have no room to critize you, so im not going to you really did and outstanding job, so 5/5

Hmm i guess there is a part 2! actually this is my very first time to read this kind of poet it was very long and kinda unique if u noticed! i love the story actually more how u describe about money and love! seems its from true to life story and i believe it is because i can really feel the emotions.. well,, actually there are some lines that i can truly relate, there are times that im in that situation (its in about love stanza)and i think there are some readers here that they can truly appreciate ur work because it is comes to ur heart and from ur effort to make this kind of poem.. i can see that its perfectly expressed all ur words from ur heart that u cant really express to someone.. i was totally impress how u really portrayed ur story here.. great job and well done 5/5

keep it up!

Wow.
I must say that's deep. (:

Well, I must say you're doing a wonderful job explaining yourself. Great emotion through the entire thing, darlin'.

The whole money and value thing is completely true, along with the high school love. (: Both of those paragraphs had the most truthful meaning. I loved it.

And, the rest is amazing, as well. I'm glad you found love. Hopefully it works out. (:

I guess I'll find out in the next one? Eh.
I'll keep posted to find out!

First off, I would just like to say this was amazing.Truly, you really put alot of feelings into it, and that opened up a window so the reader could see a bit of your character.
This peice was excellent, in a way I could relate to it.. I felt like my life was a waste it was empty, I shouldn't be here, theres no point to go on, but I held on and then shortly after he walked into my life...
My beloved, so different from the rest, and my heart swelled, I felt complete for once and truly happy..
But then with this happiness came fear, and doubt...
How could I be enough for him, the guy that seems to grab my heart and pump life into my body..
I was afraid he would leave me to die in my lonely defeat, and set his love upon another more deserving girl...
The doubts consumed me, I'd get this gut clenching fear, with and empty feeling..
And it wasn't till recently I realized that he loves me for me and to him I am his world as he was too me..
And I have managed to squash the intensity of the doubt and now im filled with the happiness again, and a completing love...

This peice was very inspiring..
well done,
5/5 --Elly.

That was amazing. your veiws on money and love and which is better is very.... whats the word? Persuasive maybe? hmm i think that works. anyways i always thought "if i just had this i would be happy" but your right material objects dont make you happy, i mean maybe for a few days but not for a lifetime. i completly agree with you, thank you for letting me peek into your thoughts it was really rewarding to read. how anyone can live without love is beyond me.

Wow this is a very long poem...But great in depth! I love it 5/5

OMFG! I loved this poem. It was perfect in description and emotion. It was just perfect all around. I dont know why, but the part that like really stood out for me was the part when you said

"love burst through the door like a strong gust of wind wiping me off my feet sending me crashing to the floor, it was the best pain I've ever felt"...

Yea...I really liked that little hyperbole. Great write. I cant wait 4 the second session.

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Wow, you really get people to think about life and the things that really matter. I'm sure many people have pondered over the thought and balance of love and money. Which weighs more!?! What do we value more. Since this is title Session 1, I'm definitely looking forward to whats coming next.

Keep writing!

This was beautiful it reminds me of something my swet boyfriend would write
it made me smile
5/5

Wow this is amazing.. I really love how you wrote this all out and shared this with everyone. It really is a beautiful piece of writing and I agree with all of it. No one is perfect but 2 people can be perfect together and that's all that matters. And you definitely can't go through life HAPPY without love. Excellent job writing this and congrats that you found the one you love. I'm off to read session 2 lol... great job! keep writing =)