I liked this poem because I can relate to it; Im sure many other people can too =]
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Thanks, I was really down when I posted this poem, my life is such a mess at the moment, I don't know in what direction I must go.

C U

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I can totally relate to what you've written... I feel the same fear of everything around me.. I like to write about how strong I am but from the inside this fear is deeply rooted in me.. sorry I got a little carried away... Anyway this poem is simple and true , I love it 5/5

I like it.
keep writing,
you're good.

So much pain in such a beautiful poem. I love the imagery and the style. I also like that the flow is constant. Very good work. Nik