Another wonderful poem! Its as good as the first one. They flow was wonderful and the rhyming was extraordinary. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

An amazing read... Flawless flow of words with such divine details... This poem reaches out and gripped my attention from the beginning to the end.. I adore your creative ingenuity.. It kept me captivated from the beginning to the end...

The details and the brilliance of your imagination is incredible... (:

Just wow. I love love love your use of words in this poem. It's simply stunning. I think you've stumbled across an amazing idea with this one and can't wait to read your next one! ^_^ I love your use of words that aren't usually used, and not only that you managed to create an entire vision and feeling of springtime with those words. You've managed to stun me AND leave me (well, almost) speechless. lol. It's really spectacular (and I'm running out of synoyms for amazing. haha) and I'm awaiting your next piece for sure. :)

Much Regards,
.:Danielle:.