Your Poem is a Vivid Poem to me. that means i like it and i honor how you put this together. if you want to know why i honor the way you write it, browse on my profile and read my backround info and you will know why i honor the way you write your pome. anyways, keep it up. becuase that's how we write a poems. i will pray for you and your mom. thanks for your sharing.

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I liked it. People can really relate to this. But there were some writing mistakes. Some were too ridiculous i had to laugh. sorry :)