Comments : He loves me he loves me not

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Every day I play the game
    over again hoping it will
    come out my way, that
    for once he'll say
    he loves me.
    - - - -
    try ;
    Everyday I play the game over again,
    hoping it will come out my way,
    that for once he'll say he loves me.

    - - -
    enjoyed the month you were
    by my side,now when I look back
    all I can do is cry.You caught my
    soul once so which is it now?
    - - -
    try;
    I enjoyed the month you were by my side.
    Now, when I look back all I can do is cry.
    You caught my soul once, so which is it now?

    - - -
    Darling, you did a wonderful job with this.
    I have to agree it's not your best.
    But, it's great.
    Therefore proving that you're an amazing writer. (:

    Keep it up darling.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    I know exactly how you feel....I have to say this is great 5/5