Wow, you are amazing love. This was so deep, the flow was excellent, the descriptions were intense and the emotion oozed out of every line. I'm not going to try and pretend I know exactly what you are talking about, I am not that advanced to understand but the images you created were brilliant and the vocabulary used worked perfectly with the poem. I love the last line, it is so simple yet so powerful. Great poem, you are truly talented. 5/5

Numb [I Have Become]

Tinted Earth: Blocked in masquerade
Brick stacked on Brick on Brick...fall
Cemented in Forever's Eyes
Too numbed in Ice; Yesterday's tongue
Of Language spoken
Of Anger signed
To petals broken then left behind
Crushed in wind, which refused to calm
And the numbness I've become

^^^^
Kaylee your poems are always so deep and leave so much to the reader's imagination .... as I know you love to make my little mind work .... lol

The imagery I feel from this one is quiet astounding. And hereis my interpretation and what I got and felt from this piece.

Brick stacked on Brick on Brick...fall
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I'm picturing a couple who built their lives together..... only
to have before their very eyes their relationship fail.

Cemented in Forever's Eyes
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Tears (cemented) in their hearts forever

Too numbed in Ice; Yesterday's tongue
Of Language spoken
^^^^
Cold words spited in anger ....

To petals broken then left behind
Crushed in wind, which refused to calm
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Two partners separated ... fallen and broken.
In a wind of (divorce maybe ?) .... separation destruction ...

And the numbness I've become
^^^
Beginning alone .... unable to face the world yet (alone)

Well this is only my interpretation of this write sweets and I am
very anxious to see if I am even close.

You words hold tightly in my mind .....
Wonderful read Kaylee as always

After going back and re-reading your poem I saw the little added piece ..... Well I was somewhat close (I guess) .... lol

You sure know how to get my mind running!

I must say I enjoyed reading this poem very much. It's refreshing to find someone that can use such descriptive words and comparisons. It effectively gets the point across. I understood without reading the explanation and I think if someone needs to read the explanation to understand then they don't truly grasp the concept of the poem itself. It is well thought out and creative with good imagery. If you can use such good choice of words in all your poems then you are a great poet. Definite 5/5. <3

Wow! Kay this was awesome!!..

"Cemented in Forever's Eyes"

The entire poem was fantastic, however simply adored this line.. Painful yet wonderful to read.. Loved it!!!

Kaylee,
Simply put. I believe you are by far one of the best poets on this site. I know I keep saying that, the more I read the more I believe it. Your poetry leaves me breathless, thinking "WOW...now that is something to make you think about "
Your footnote reminded me of the saying... It wouldn't matter if I complained because no-one would listen, and if they did they wouldn't care. How true this is becoming more and more in society.
Beautiful write dear.

Kaylee
Awesome write. The imagery and word choices are great.

To petals broken then left behind
Crushed in wind, which refused to calm
And the numbness I've become

This stanza really is heart wrenching. I know this pain all to well. Could feel every word you have penned.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

I think in some way this speaks to all of us. Great poem. 5/5

This was just amazing. Your poetry actually makes me think, which I cant say for most of what I read on this site. I dont say as bad thing though. What I also love about this poem is that different people can relate it to their lives and interpret it different ways. The words you used truly fit the scene you were creating. Even your explanations are poetic. Truly talented you are. Thank you for you comment on my poem, they are real helpful. Well done on this piece. *5/5*

Really great style

Man those aare some wise words. Great job
-vino

A nice combination. Although the flow was cut off in some points and the poem didn't seem logical, I found this piece interesting. Nice job 5/5

Once again another piece of art. What I really enjoy doing is picturing this. It makes me think of those strange short movies that have no purpose at those film festivals. Ya know what I mean. They're so random and seem strange but in truth they have deep meaning. Your work is just a pleasure to picture. Just wonderful. Five. I am convinced that for you to write something that I would hate would be very difficult and nearly impossible to do unless on purpose. Great job.

Really good job man, 5/5, this gave me goosebumps, i just wrote a poem titled numb but its not nearly as good as urs.

Cleverly written. Excellent word choice, flow and use of a metaphor. And, i love that song! Great job!

Wow,
love it most cleverly written..fecxellent word choice, flow and use of a metaphor..All in all a great job 5/5 xD