Really good, keep it up

Hey this is really good, yopu are a great poet, keep it up

Amazing poem, darling.
Once again the stanzas need a bit of tweaking. But, other than that it's an amazing poem.

Here's the way I think it could be changed;

What did I do? What did I say?
To make you feel that way.
I always tried to be good to you,
be what you want,
but somehow it ended like this...

with me breaking your Heart.
From the very start
I knew it would take time,
I knew in my soul [[that ]] my life
wasn't a cheerful little rhyme.

So all I want to know now is
What did I do?
What did i say?
And I want you to know
I'm sorry for the mess I've made.

I love this it is really good. :-) 5/5