Comments : Journey

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very beautifully written. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was really beautiful in every way. a very pure and emotional write. i loved this piece. it had a fantastic flow, and ery heartfelt. i love reading poems such as this one.

    Loving you is like being on a journey,
    Traveling through your deepest thoughts,
    Searching through your wildest dreams,
    Always involving you and me

    i loved that stanza the most. it held alot of meaning and it was a perfect ending. very detailed also. loved it all. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.