After Samhain Party

by Robert   Nov 22, 2007


You laid me down into my bed
and kissed the make up off my face
took off my dress and held my hand
i wished the moment would never end

both drunk and high, it felt surreal
you breathing softly in my ear
Bloc Party playing on i tunes
and i was staring into the unknown

you asked me if i was OK
i said, this is too good to be true
you told me i was looking sad
softly i whispered, "i love you"

then you whispered something in my ear
something i was longing to hear
something i have never heard before
made me feel like i have never felt before

you told me how beautiful i am
and wrapped your arms around my chest
i smiled and slowly closed my eyes
drowned in sleep- i never felt so content

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  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    It was beautiful! really elegant flow and i loved the word choice the fact that it ws from a gurlz point of veiw intreged me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww what a sweet and loving poem. The emotions you described were easy to relate with and the details you used, made it easier for me to have the scene in my head. All in all a great poem. Well done *5/5*