Aww what a sweet and loving poem. The emotions you described were easy to relate with and the details you used, made it easier for me to have the scene in my head. All in all a great poem. Well done *5/5*

Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!

It was beautiful! really elegant flow and i loved the word choice the fact that it ws from a gurlz point of veiw intreged me!