by Tracy D Rollings Nov 22, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
Life is something we all take for granted |
by dawn green
Very touching! very good write!!! |
by sian
I completely understand the point that you were trying to make tracey. At the end of the day life is too short to spend arguing and ignoring eachother and once its gone, the people that are left behind need the kind of closure that they may not be able to get now that the person is gone. Its important to tell those dear to you, friends and family how much they are loved and apreciated. I thought that your piece was a touching tribute to your friend, and for what its worth my condolences for your loss. lots of love sian. x |
by Tom Swart
The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works. |
by Katlette
Wow! I really like this! It makes me want to cry. Poetry and writing stuff like this is how I "get away." It remeinds me of the people who ment so much ti me that I don't have anymore. |
by Alexandra
Very nice. Worded good. 5/5 |