What a lovely little tribute to your friend. I think this is a lovely piece. I have always held my family and friends close to me. It something my mother always drummed into, just be there for those you care about and they will be there for you. Im sorry about your friend but this is lovely way to honour his memory. I beleive that those we care about dont ever really leave us, even if we think they have. Take care.

Kelly
xx

Very nice. Worded good. 5/5

Alexandra

Wow! I really like this! It makes me want to cry. Poetry and writing stuff like this is how I "get away." It remeinds me of the people who ment so much ti me that I don't have anymore.

The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.

I completely understand the point that you were trying to make tracey. At the end of the day life is too short to spend arguing and ignoring eachother and once its gone, the people that are left behind need the kind of closure that they may not be able to get now that the person is gone. Its important to tell those dear to you, friends and family how much they are loved and apreciated. I thought that your piece was a touching tribute to your friend, and for what its worth my condolences for your loss. lots of love sian. x

Very touching! very good write!!!