Wow, as always ur great poems are leading me to a world, which is full of thinking and wonders. this was a great one which touched me a lot as it is dealing with a reality of love that most of us can relate with,
again a great job my my favorite poet and greatest friend ever.

Hi... I am sure you must be surprised to see my comments. Let me first tell you that you have written a mindblowing poem. I feel there are a couple of mistakes but I wont point them out unless I confirm that they are so. But ultimately, your poem is a good one... Keep writing but let me tell you something... We have gr8 expectations from you. I feel as if the best one of yours is yet to come... Take care.

You have written here a splendid, splendid verse, and the emotion is strong throughout. :) I thought it was astounding and heartfelt. I loved it.