by Ciao Bella
Awesome poem haii i love poems that are dedicated to people and its very nice that u did this for ur friend |
by ABake
I liked htis. It is a nice tribute. I think that it could of been longer. The emotion was deep && I could feel your sympathy and admiration towards her. Great job! |
by Abu3li
You pretend that all is fine |
by Bryan
Tis a very good poem haii, the flow tis perfect, capitalize the "a" in the 4th line, i give this a flawless 5/5!!!! keep them coming!!! |
I liked this alot it was very sad and emotional and how you just said it mad it very beautiful. 5/5 |