Good poem - liked it.
5/5

Oooh!!!..this is so powerful!!..its literally dragging u to read it!
its going
Aly keep reading!
hehe..loved it!!..so much power put into this!!..the only think i could change is like when u mentioned the queen bee, i didnt think tht worked as a good metaphor, so just a suggestion, so might consider revising!..lol
great job!
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