Missing You

by Kalee   Nov 23, 2007


As I lay here alone
In my room
I can't stop myself
From missing you so much

It tears my heart in two
Knowing that we live so far apart
When all we want
Is to be together

My heart aches
With the pain of missing you
I stare up at the sky every night
Wondering if you are looking too

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  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Love this poem
    it makes me sad
    but i like
    keep writting

  • 16 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey mate sorry long time no chat.. bn so busy with wk and my lappy being messing about... brilliant poem sweety.. so who u
    writing this about hun xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    This one is nice as well =] I really like the last stanza.

    "My heart aches
    With the pain of missing you
    I stare up at the sky every night
    Wondering if you are looking too"

    Sometimes I do that too, just look at a random star and wonder if he see's it too. Nice how you put your emotions into this poem.
    5/5 again
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Top rated poem, nice work, this was excellent, had so much emotion filled to the brim.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Torey Hafford

    Thats hot i love it