It is good.I liked it.

Okay first off .. be careful about who you meet online. Sometimes there are not always what they seem. Keep a guard up until you know who he is.

The poem was simple and sweet. The message was clear to the reader and the emotion you wrote with was real.

Well done.

It's a good poem, well written

The sentiment is nice, but your flow could use a little fine tuning. The third line in your stanzas tend to run a little too long in comparison to the other lines. Good start.

I think it's sweet that you care so much already. I think in your line 'For hours on in.' did you mean '....on end.'? and the second stanza throws it off a little. And the very last 2 lines don't make that much sense the way they're written. lol Pretty good for what little you had to work with though. With some small changes it could easily be a great poem. It still effectively gets the point across and is creative. I'd give you a 3.5/5 but I can't. lol

I really liked the first stanza, loved it actually.
That one is fine, the rest could be fine tuned. But there's definitely great context there.
Keep it up.

It is very emotional poem, I can relate to everything you wrote. This poem is also well written. The imagery was great too. You deserve 5/5 for this one!!!

I think you clearly described this person so much so that I could almost picture him. I hope he sees this. It's amazing. 5/5

Cyber love..... hmm
different topic.
loved the rhyme scheme
:)
plz return the favor

Relationships bia the internet fail most the time but not always, i suffered from it two time and now i decided not to love...if you really love each other maybe you can do it but i don't advise it but hey, i really liked the poem it reminds of my old days...thanks for this sweet poem

Nice one

however watch it

coz it's a matter of addiction

that's it

good luck

take care

For hours on in.

I think instead of in you might of ment "end"

I found this poem to be quite sweet to tell you the truth. Your word choice is simple but effective and created an almost chant like flow while I was reading it. The topic is interesting because many people do fall for people online, I'm sure many could relate to this. The emotion I could feel was quite vivid and created a loving feel over the atmosphere. A warm piece which was well written. Good effort. ~Mel

I actually think it is fine as is except the last line is a little off but like you said you need to fix some things so there is my opinion nice poem be careful
5/5
kaila

Awwz i rele liike it...it reminded me of sumthing i used to to and feel....another great poem!

I really love the title. You're the master of the poem like this. Keep up the good work

I loved this one. I actually met one of my ex's online, so I know how it feels. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.