This is perfect in every way...from the flow, and rhyming to the content and message...

I love the way the title ties into the ending line with such perfection....even though it's a sad poem it ends on that vision of better things ahead! love it!

"I thought I'd give it time to change,
But years have now passed by,
Still nothing found within your plan,
That screams out, you and I."

^ this sounds just like what I went through in the not too distant past....I'm sure this poem is one many can relate to on a very personal level....nicely done! Take care, Debbie

The flow of this poem is endlessly effective... The choice of words and the expressed emotion is strangely captivating...

You interpret these emotions so easily which I find hard to do... The way this poem is able to captivate me from the beginning of the poem to the end is flawlessly effective...

A great write... 5/5!