by debbylyn Nov 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Where once a beauty did reside |
by Morgan
Beautifully sad |
by Pete
Such a sad story being told within the thsi piece, you portray the despair and absolute desolateness the body mind and soul are left in when love departs. |
by Rachel RTVW
The flow and word choice are very well done. Heartbreaking and brilliant! Excellent job! |
Love your mind..i love it all |
by Lithium
You are cindy i must say are both very creative, what a great poem to well done xox sam |