Wow Thats a really nice heartfelt poem. It has a lot of pain that I can easily relate to.Nice work you and your friend! LOL

I know what that is like ive been there before and it hurts alot and it takes a bit of time to get over

Thats really good. I can realte in a big way.
5/5

Dis poem is so touching, a lot of pain in it datz part of life i guess. I love ur poem, you shud know dat dis world is part yours & take your time to shine!! nice work u and ur friend, keep it up 5/5

I just love this. I, like many others relate to it in a very big way...My heart is sad.....5/5....xoxoxo

Thats real. And I can relate

Wow i've felt this way soo many times great poem!

You were once the reason my heart beat
But, now your gone and I feel so incomplete
Closing my eyes now all I sense in pain
When ever can I see the daylight again

my FAV part =D