Take Me Away (Trijan Refrain)

by Cindy   Nov 23, 2007


My love please come take me away
Where pain no longer lives
Where colors are bright no longer gray
Our love we can relive
Waiting for you to come for me
Together the sun we can see
Waiting for you
Waiting for you
Praying for you my final plea

My love please come take me away
I've been waiting for so long
Back in your arms to always stay
Hearing your loves sweet song
Joyous longing to fill my heart
Never again will we depart
Joyous longing
Joyous longing
Waiting so long for you sweetheart

My love please come take me away
Hold me in your embrace
Need to feel the suns warming rays
To touch your handsome face
Please take my hand, holding it tight
Lead me from darkness to the light
Please take my hand
Please take my hand
Fly away with me to new heights

Written By: Cynthia Graver Nov 23, 2007

Trijan Refrain:
The Trijan Refrain, created by Jan Turner, consists of three 9-line stanzas, for a total of 27 lines.
Line 1 is the same in all three stanzas, although a variation of the form is not to repeat the same line
at the beginning of each stanza. In other words, the beginning line of each stanza can be different.
The first four syllables of line 5 in each stanza are repeated as the double-refrain for lines 7 and 8.
The Trijan Refrain is a rhyming poem with a set meter and rhyme scheme as follows:

Rhyme scheme: a/b/a/b/c/c/d,d refrain of first 4 words of line five /c

Meter: 8/6/8/6/8/8/4,4 refrain/8

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  • 16 years ago

    by Netta

    I LOVE THIS POEM IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL I ALMOST SHED A TEAR..... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    My love please come take me away
    Where pain no longer lives
    Where colors are bright no longer gray
    Our love we can relive
    Waiting for you to come for me
    Together the sun we can see
    Waiting for you
    Waiting for you
    Praying for you my final plea
    ^^^^
    Cindy I can feel the ache in your heart through these words of longing you have woven my friend. ~wipes tear~ very heart touching!

    My love please come take me away
    Hold me in your embrace
    Need to feel the suns warming rays
    To touch your handsome face
    Please take my hand, holding it tight
    Lead me from darkness to the light
    Please take my hand
    Please take my hand
    Fly away with me to new heights
    ^^^
    Oh Cindy hun, the day will come where your sweet true love will take your hand, guiding you to the light of heaven's doors and hold you tightly for all of eternity.

    I loved your title choice .... and you have penned a spectacular masterpiece with this form . It looks like such a difficult form but you made it look so easy.

    Hugs for you .... and ~claps~ for this wonderfully penned write!
    Love ya
    Luanne

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Please take my hand, holding it tight

    this line brought tears to my eyes, you have such a talent cindy, i can become lost in your passionate words and feel as if i am living your story, contineu to write with such talent as you do, you are an awsome poet and an inspiration xox sam

  • 17 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Dear Cindy,

    I have no words for this beautiful hearbreaking piece you have written. Your talent shines like a star on this site and I feel so honoured to be on it and learn from poets like you.

    your work always has a deep impact on the reader. It reflects the special person you are inside. And i guess that's why you are so special to all of us.

    keep writing and inspiring
    shobhana

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Cindy, This is an exceptionally written piece, you have done absolute wonders with the form and the marriage of words to the form is like on made in heaven. Well done.

    Steve

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