Interesting for sure. perhaps your most intriguing piece. I enjoyed it a lot. Actually writing out the steps was quite interesting. It provided many good visuals and really left the reader feeling void of any love for him. Good job!
Charisma*

Holyy bejeezez. Wow. You not only put a picture in my mind but a whole movie. Lol. I loved the length of this poem because you kept my attention throughout the whole peice.

Also, the flow was not off at all and the emotion was tremendous. Every bit of this poem was a.m.a.z.i.n.g! Again, great job!

5.5

Amber...