How strong are you now

Heya great poem
this is an awesome poem
you dont need tips from me
i need tips from you
i like how you repeated the first line in every verse it gave it more power good job:D:D

keenan

Nice poem, i enjoyed while reading it...i was thinking about you today i was like "i didn't email her for a long time, is there anything new in her life?" lol
so how are you?

You have strong emotions in this poem, and it really shines out. Keep up the good work.

~Ashley