Nice poem, Adel

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

If you are punishing me I don't care
As long as I will have our love to share
If you are punishing me I don't care
Just tell me in your mind I am still there

it's a sweet poem
needs more improvement to be so impressive

I liked this one. You express dispare and yerning very well. I pray you find her.

Whooaa.. Everything came out right.. Wow.. U r good writing like this.. I'll read other of yours. U r amazing!! Keep it up!!

Checking my emails each day and night
Hoping to find yours and retrieve the light

these are my fav lines because i can relate to these feelings! i love this poem. the feeling expressed in this poem are so real and raw. so powerful, i can relate to this so much! love it!

I really loved this poem, its exactly what im going through right now. But, in my case it's more like 3 weeks that will soon turn into a month. Waiting really hurts, but its all worth it in the end.
I abslutely loved your choice of words, they gave the poem such a wonderful meaning.
take care x

Gr8 piece..keep it up

Wow. This is extremely good.

Wow beautiful absoulutly beautiful

She didn't deceive you....she wanted to give you her life....and although you have not trusted her...she still wants to be your wife.

Her head became sore,
Her heart felt weak.
As she went to lie down,
Her hell began in her sleep

She awoke in the hospital,
Unsure if what went wrong.
She couldn't think clearly,
Her precious life...No longer a song.

Each day was a struggle,
Each moment a strife.
And then it had hit her,
He didn't know what happened to his future wife.

Oh how she longed to tell him,
How her life became bad.
She could feel in her soul,
That this mans own heart was filled with sad.

While laying in that hospital,
Each day she thought of him.
Took that strength and worked hard,
She she would walk again.

The day came to be,
That she was to go home.
Her family crying tears of joy,
Her heart cried in silence...alone.

She knew that her love for him,
Hadn't gone away.
But who could she have call him,
Her father would have felt betrayed.

She mustered up all that she could,
To go and find this great man.
She needed him to know she was alive,
Her love to him was a delicate flower held by his hand.

She went on to read all his words to her,
And silently she wept.
How awful she was feeling inside,
For all his love to her...he still kept.

She left him a message,
Declaring her faith to his heart.
But its her own father she was fearing,
Would he want us apart?

It was to be that they found each other again,
The two of them able to talk, laugh and cry.
She kept saying she was sorry for not contacting him,
He said, my sweet...I understand why.

He began with "I Love You"
I want no other in my life.
These last three months clearly made me see,
I want you as my wife.

And as this love story continues to grow,
She gets stronger with each passing day.
They pray to above for guidance,
The two will become one...with Allah showing them the way.

salwa~

Wow your good

"I am used to wait I don't mind
I am used to pain I can abide
But I can't stand to be left behind"

You have no idea wut did these three lines do to me
I really love this poem Adel, I dont even know wut to say
5/5

Wow... great poem... keep on looking there is someone for everyone...

"You made me believe that you won't leave
Have you deceived? What do you achieve?"
that's gotta b my favorite part of this poem again a very meanningful poem lotz of your poems r that way and i like it lol hope u make more soon^^

Ufffhhh..i just started reading 2 of ur stuff and it seem like i will enjoy reading the rest...keep up the good work..

I really enjoyed this poem thank you. 5/5

Okie me not sure if i've commented on this one yet >< but anyhow...wonderfully made poem. keep up the great work!! ^^

Again i see how its beautiful u have big heart and natural feelings

Great poem, very touching. I love how its full of emotions so true. <3
good job.