Comments : Die Because i said so

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Awesome job! very dark and bloody in my mind. this is my favorite part again i don't know y.

    you will die because i said so
    if not ill do it myself
    making you a helper elf
    of the darkness that i hold
    becoming apart of me.

    awesome job once again. i like berly notice right now. all the poems i have read are so sad and dark.. man am i slow. hehe.. keep it up!

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • Wow amazing i loved it so much