Wow!! this is an amazing poem, its written SO well, very discriptive and gave a beautiful picture! I really liked the last stanza. Keep it up, I gave it a 5/5. Please remember to somment AND rate my 2 poems that I requested on that discussion board. Thanks alot!
Rachel

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM!

Amazingly written
great work,truly
great word selection,felt the emotion
keep it up!