Pretty cool. Keep it up the good work.

-Amy

Aww mina, this was such a gorgeous poem, it was just so beautiful and sweet, and even reading it made me smile. it flowed so strongly as well and it gives the reader some hope while reading it. 5/5
gaby

You have some really good stuff..I love all your poems. They are very real and very deep...Keep on writing...Vot For u...plz Vote for me...

This poem was excellent XD
Great job 5/5
I really enjoyed reading it, your a good writter ^^

Really good...really like this..!!

I like this.. i mean it is real..and thats what poetry is about..keep on writting gurl..

I agree with Rooe - space makes space within each thought. It lets a poem pause and breath. Each story will be told, you're right about that, tell your story well and may your passion find perfect blank pages to fill with your own tales. Peace - keep up the good writes.

Thats a good flowing poem. wow.

Well written & beautifully penned ...5/5 great job, keep it up

-=pulls out a flower-=
*starts picking off the petels*
=-she loves me-=-)
-=(she loves me not-=(
=-she loves me-=-)
-=(she loves me not-=(
-=she loves me-=-)
-=(she loves me not-=(

She loves me ^.^