Comments : One Time Remedy

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, wow...
    This leaves me speechless in a way...
    This is the best love poem I've read in a while, it is so deep and filled with truly profound thoughts and brilliant conclusions. Every stanza is original which is excellent. Your descriptions made the whole piece even better, shining through the most vivid imagery that can create such fantastic pictures in the reader's mind.
    Truly greatly done.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -The things you may not want to forget are the things
    that take longer to memorize, and if you can see the
    picture through, I still go slower, taking it down a couple
    frames, making the colors and words come back alive.-
    ^^^
    This is simply deep and enchantingly breathtaking!

    Keep up!
    5/5 from me