Simple as the Sims

by shantavia   Nov 24, 2007


I WISH THE WORLD BETWEEN US WAS COMMON AND SIMPLE COMPARE IT WITH THE SIMS
YOU HAVE A CHOICE STICK WITH IT OR GET WITH IT EITHER YOU LOVE ME OR YOU DON'T , TAKE IT OR LEAVE IT
IT DOESN'T MATTER WHAT PEOPLE SAY CAUSE THE WHOLE GAME IS BASICED ON US ANYWAYS
YOU GOT YOUR FAMILY AND I GOT MINES
OUR HOPES AND DREAMS WILL COMBINE ANOTHER TIME
RUMORS AND GOSSIP ALL THE TIME
HITTING AND BRICKING ANIT EVEN WROTH A DIME
BETWEEN REALITY AND LIFE YOU AND ME EXIST TO FIGHT
SO HERE I AM DAY DREAMING ALL MY LIFE JUST WAITING FOR REALITY To SHINE

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  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I like the concept of the poem.. Definitely a 'like me, or leave me' 'against all the oods' type of poem.. I think you need to double check some spellings, and the grammar, but as a whole, it's a really good poem. I hope you don't mind critique-no offence intended. As I say, a great poem, but for a few mistakes.. Well done. xx

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