Only fear of death

by mier   Nov 24, 2007


Dented eyes in inane memories of childhood fears,
immobilizing scars of my fabricated tears.
Embrace this secluded mind of mortal obscurity,
I linger in the void of unfulfilled heresy.

I question the tainted whispers of tranquil serenity,
that provoke the presence of my twisted soul to autopsy.
The hand I held out for help gets abandoned and stepped on,
pushing me, forcing me to be the person I tried to change from.

Within the fragile glass of my shattered reflection,
hides the deadened gaze of the absence of my emotion.
I dwell endlessly in the pale frisson of my nightmares,
while the intent sanity if a lonely dream stares.

The scented voice of my repulsive demise,
choking and smothering the bane of my breath.
This mirror of my reflective web of lies,
tormenting and haunting my only fear of death.

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  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    I see your poems are dark some sad. and yet im interested in them. you seem to speak some form of truth in your poetry it seems like just another way to express how you feel its clear in your poetry and it seems your depressed alot. this poem is good. i like it it keeps me interested with the different topics but one goal. one thing it is i do find hard to describe your poetry. its unique and thats what i like about it keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
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  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    This is a really well written dark poem with really nice sentiment behind it. I think you portray the nobility of paying our respects to the people that have passed away really nicely.

    As this title and topic is a rather morbid one, you brighten it up well with really well worded metaphors and vibrant images.

    Overall it's a really well written poem, very enjoyable to read.

    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    Amazing poem. real depth in the emotion, i relli liked it 5/5

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