Amazing poem. real depth in the emotion, i relli liked it 5/5

This is a really well written dark poem with really nice sentiment behind it. I think you portray the nobility of paying our respects to the people that have passed away really nicely.

As this title and topic is a rather morbid one, you brighten it up well with really well worded metaphors and vibrant images.

Overall it's a really well written poem, very enjoyable to read.

~Pete.

Wow...
This is so dark, with effective and captivating atmosphere through the whole piece. Your rhymes are great and original and the descriptions in this piece truly amazed me. You have great talent which shines through your superb dark poetry.
I like how you changed the rhyme scheme in the last stanza, that is very effective.
Keep up!

Rhythm of this poem is so effective and it has superb atmosphere, totally unique. I am impressed! Your poems are very inspiring and they always puts me in awe, they are so original and you write with such passion and power. Well done, this piece is outstanding! It has some complex thoughts, excellent imagery and the way that you expressed emotions is superb. I enjoyed in every line...

I see your poems are dark some sad. and yet im interested in them. you seem to speak some form of truth in your poetry it seems like just another way to express how you feel its clear in your poetry and it seems your depressed alot. this poem is good. i like it it keeps me interested with the different topics but one goal. one thing it is i do find hard to describe your poetry. its unique and thats what i like about it keep writing