Its real intresting....
different but intresting i like the end the most bout how u wouldn't cry... its good... keep it up
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Kay
I like it,wish u didnt feel this way,but good poem
16 years ago
by Pesamenteiro
"It ain't no fun
being me
If i had a gun
There would be no me"
I read that part and I immediatly had to finish the poem, a good begining can affect how good the whole poem is, its a first impression, the ending wasn't as good as the begining but I still liked it
5/5