I love this. Just the rhymes you used flowed flawlessly. Your message was amazing, and the last line of your poem was perfect.
5/5.

Goodness! This piece blew me away.. The flow of words is superb.. I really admire the way you write that your flow of words is so captivating and convincing.. I can't even pick out my favorite part of the poem 'cos everything about is brilliant and I adore every bit of this poem....