...Beautiful WORDS...
Life is just a series of moments that favor the present...

An inspirational read.. I admire the way you write in this poem.. Immaculate flow of words and written with honest emotion and interpretation... It's easy to relate to this poem considering that it's about being trapped and I am awed by your words and the images you potray... Very enchanting...

Nicely written... (:

I think anybody that reads this piece will be able to relate to this. It doesn't seem to refer to any one incident in life .. It's about life itself! At some point in our lives we all feel caged or trapped; unsure what to do to free ourselves. You touch on something everyone will have to deal with.

Flawless flow in this piece, but I've come to expect nothing less.

A really solid rhyme scheme coupled with great use of vocabulary make this a thoroughly great piece of writing.

~Pete.

Oh, I forgot to add .. The last stanza is simply brilliant, it's almost a summary of what to do when you get this feeling of being trapped. Fantastic way to finish this piece.

~Pete.