In love and obcessed

by Finalgravedigger   Nov 24, 2007


My passion and art
derives from my soul
feelings form the heart
are what make me whole.

My art is depression
with her as my obsession
slowly taking over every part of my life,
my writings show only a small part of my strife.

My love that filled my spirit
had softened my mind
as she ripped both apart
the emotions I could no longer hide.

So I became an artist of pain
with love as the obsession
showing my life invain
never escaping her oppression.

This is just how obsessed I am
with her as my ever blinding light
I know I will never shine
and I simply cannot fight.

This is what my paintings will always show,
a soul and heart left with a horrible dark mark.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Jane Do-Re-Mi

    Nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Samantha

    OMG!!!!!!!! That's sooo good.... Sad sort of but excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Rhiannon

    I really like this.
    I feel your pain.
    you write really good poems.
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Beautifully expressed!
    although the title needs to be changed there is a mispell
    "in love and obcessed"
    should be
    "in love and obsessed"

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I have just one suggestion, you should try to use some more original words to create more powerful atmosphere, try to create some metaphorical unique image, or to simply express your emotions with some different words. I truly enjoy in your work but in many of your poems you use -strife- or -fight, and your rhyming also should be more unique. I trying to say that you must expand your wording and vocab.

    Other than that really interesting poem, I adore your starting idea for it. It could be better with some metaphors and other words but anyway you did good job and few lines are excellent the way they are.
    This is just my opinion, of course I really don't want to offend you or something like that.

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