Cyan Gemstones (Tanka)

I enjoyed this a lot... I think with some formed poetry, especially the shorter ones, people tend to forget that every word needs to be used particularly and with poetic intention. You have not forgotten that here. I like how your last like is a departure from the smooth water-droplet-esque descriptions of the earlier poem, into a cooler and almost more forlorn mood, but it still works.

Breathtakingly beautiful! Every line a jewel.

A very nicely written piece. seriously,
outstanding. your choice of words were very
well picked out and i really like that last line.
:] a great write. 5/5.

This poem posses it's own simplicity but it is so amazing, really. Imagery in every line is created with such passion and it is so vivid. I really enjoyed in your captivating descriptions that made this incredible atmosphere. Well done. You are truly talented for writing formed poetry and every picture that you painted here is so clear in my mind. Beautiful tanka.

Wow! Beautiful choice of words... It's short but oh so enchantingly captivating... The imagination in this poem is incredible..

Silky threads of night
entwined with river's stillness

It is amazing how you came up with these stunning images... And the intensity of the imagery here is superb...