Standing here alone

by stella   Nov 24, 2007


I'm standing here alone,
but so many rush by.
Stood all on my own,
none of them see I cry.

So I wipe away my tears,
tears that show my pain.
Hoping it will take away my fears,
and I can be happy again.

Stuck here in this desperate place,
trying my best to get through.
Yet there's still hurt on my face,
everytime I think of you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    Well done, your fluency and word choice were very good. You didnt have to say much to show a lot of emotion. Good job =)

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I think everyone can relate to the last stanza. Most have felt that total loss of someone they cared about. We've all had at least one broken heart. Good job!
    *ME*