Comments : Standing here alone

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I think everyone can relate to the last stanza. Most have felt that total loss of someone they cared about. We've all had at least one broken heart. Good job!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    Well done, your fluency and word choice were very good. You didnt have to say much to show a lot of emotion. Good job =)