by Whitney
Aww, this was a good! fluency was good as well keep writing =) |
by MyEscape
This is great with flow and rhyme, a good piece about picking up the pieces of your life and moving on. I enjoyed! Nice to see some new talent! |
by Jeff
Loved this poem...especially the message in it.We learn and grow..everyday.And that is what I call the beauty of life.Keep writing. |