by Debbie Nov 24, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
There was, however, one quality of Leandro's prominent features that palpably transfixed my whole being--his emerald eyes. It seemed to me that the exceeding radiance of his bright green orbs, whose singular luster conjured images of spring, of rebirth, and of youth therein, brought forth into my heart substantial feelings of thrill and exhilaration: just one quick glance at those orbs enriched my joy, intensified my pleasure, and magnified my bliss all the more. Epitomizing the stunningly beautiful Adonis on earth, he provided tangible evidence that he was certainly a part of the springtime of youth by means of his luminous eyes of jade. Without a doubt, I was deeply captivated with his earnest glance that an ever-increasing anxiety enthused within while I await the morrow to come and gawk at his eyes once more. It thus became apparent to me that the love I had for Leandro was deeply rooted from such an ocular magnetism. |
by Fluffy
Remarkable. |
by debbylyn
I love the descriptions of Leandro's eyes....I can feel the heroine's fascination....mesmerizing! |
by Cindy
Wow Debs...You have really put some work into this. It is really fantasic. It is captivating and makes the reader want to continue in your wonderful story. |