Lies Instead

by Erica   Nov 25, 2007


Today is not much different
Same as yesterday's before
Just trying hard to stay alive
Breathe in, breath out, no more

That shouldn't be a problem
My hearts already racing
Premonition feeds suspicion
Of disaster I am facing

Still I know much better than
To ignore its in my head
Yet, against my better judgment
I believe the lies instead

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  • 16 years ago

    by Common Sense

    My hearts already racing
    ... I didn't know you have two hearts
    heart's*

    To ignore its in my head
    its ... do you mean what's* ?

    Yet, against my better judgment
    The comma is unnecessary ... it detracts from the most powerful sentence of the poem.

    Do you even proofread these? Lol x)

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