The Finding

by Erica   Nov 25, 2007


Place to be free
You're just finding it now?
Learning the way
Though you've always known how

Melting away
All in search for the cure
Ready to break
Still a little unsure

Set it aside
Its not real anymore
Coming back home
Twice as strong as before

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  • 16 years ago

    by Common Sense

    Place to be free
    I would suggest changing the line to:
    'A place to be free'
    Because it's the opening line and deserves to be more of a powerful statement.

    Its not real anymore
    It's*

    I'm not looking for these mistakes, they're all just what I find when I'm reading them normally 8| I like these shorter poems, because you're good at making a point with so few words.

    LOL The first letter of each thing spells out PMS
    Place
    Meliting
    Set
    ... Hahaha, was that intentional? xD

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