by Whitney Nov 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My heart sits dark and cold. |
by kaida clover
I see your a fan of the rhyming.. good piece very honest and revealing.. to admit ones mistakes is a hard task, but u did it well.. |
by SweetGrief
Wow, this is amaznig, really... amazing words great rhyme , and so sad ! keep it up ! |
Omg! i love it! I was reading this and thinking to myself "did this girl write a poem about my last relationship???" sept i didn't rly cheat..i kissed his friend on the cheak as a thank u lol thats a totaly different story..but seriously love this! keep it up and thanks a bunch for your comment! |